That writing mentor told me to kill my favorite paragraph and I'm glad I did
I had this writing teacher in a workshop last year, an older guy named Tom who wrote for magazines. He read my short story and said "that paragraph where the character describes the sunset, cut it, it's slowing everything down." I was so mad at first because I thought that paragraph was beautiful. But I tried it, took it out, and the story moved way faster and got picked up by a small lit journal 3 months later. Has anyone else had a piece of advice that hurt to hear but turned out to be right?